really interesting read! i love to see a flawed narrator, and i like how there was consequences to his words. i think it would be fun if you built up more about the other members of the facility aside from jenny, but i think you did a lot of really cool things given the word count limit! nice work!
thank you so much!! this is my first time writing first person. i would've loved to expand on the other patients but i was already struggling with the word limit.
jamriot
really interesting read! i love to see a flawed narrator, and i like how there was consequences to his words. i think it would be fun if you built up more about the other members of the facility aside from jenny, but i think you did a lot of really cool things given the word count limit! nice work!
picofetish69
thank you so much!! this is my first time writing first person. i would've loved to expand on the other patients but i was already struggling with the word limit.